Elven Hands

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Monday, 18-Dec-2006 22:32:25

Crystal hands with butterflies
At the water’s edge, I sigh
Drifting on a sea of stars
Sunsets made of rose petals
The scent of lilac and jasmine create an enchanting infusion
Moonbeams dance across the frothy tide
As elves sing an exotic melody
There language touching one’s heart
Like the soft caress of a spring breeze
There voices rise and fall, on a calm wind
The harmony of there voices embracing me
My eyes close and I’m at peace.

Post 2 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Monday, 18-Dec-2006 22:34:43

Sorry, I essed p. The title of he poem s Elven Song.

Post 3 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Monday, 18-Dec-2006 22:53:24

So lovely, so gentle, so calming...enchantingly beautiful

Post 4 by Daenerys Targaryen (Enjoying Life) on Tuesday, 19-Dec-2006 0:16:54

I like it.

Post 5 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Tuesday, 19-Dec-2006 0:46:35

I like it too. It's so peaceful. J. R. R. Tolkien might have written something like this.

Bob

Post 6 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 20-Dec-2006 8:37:42

Hmm Tolkien was more into the magic of elves, there was always a sense of darkness in his elvish poems. But this is very good.

Post 7 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Wednesday, 20-Dec-2006 20:24:55

I'm glad you guys like it.

Post 8 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Thursday, 21-Dec-2006 16:04:59

I see a motief, nature, moon beams, earth, and elves. I liked this poem, it was calming and peaceful

Post 9 by ablindgibsongirl (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Thursday, 28-Dec-2006 12:20:47

Very peaceful as the others said, a gentle reminder, their not there. I learned this over time in writing too. It's easy to confuse them.

Post 10 by Colombian Coke (Veteran Zoner) on Thursday, 28-Dec-2006 18:34:49

I like it, it really paints that kind of song picture